This is a cool piece of writing! I like how you met up with Kolotita in Cananda. I can tell that you felt overwhelmed with excitement from being in a new country. I would feel like that too!
Remember to check over your work to see if it flows. Also, have you been trying to use 'I SAW A WABUB' in your writing?
Hi Lynette,
ReplyDeleteThis is a cool piece of writing! I like how you met up with Kolotita in Cananda. I can tell that you felt overwhelmed with excitement from being in a new country. I would feel like that too!
Remember to check over your work to see if it flows. Also, have you been trying to use 'I SAW A WABUB' in your writing?
Miss West