Suddenly the plane crashed into the soaking wet grass with a loud BANG! From the back of the plane. Oh No, cried the passengers, what are we going to do? cried an old lady. The passengers thought that they were in danger but as Mist came out of the plane people were even worried.
Suddenly the caption of the plane Jumped out as quickly as he could to see what was happening.
“Phew” Nothing happened the captain replied but there was only one thing that was wrong that he did not Know about that one of the planes wings on the right came off.
The plane was ready for another take off but the people were scared. “Calling All Passengers Please get ready for another take off back to Paris” The captain replied on the loudspeaker.
Everyone buckled their seat belts back together with a simple click! Of the belt. The plane was already starting to move but the plane tipped over to the left hand and was going to be even more trouble because they were stuck,then everybody had to come out of the but with terrified faces they
The plane was ready for another take off but the people were scared. “Calling All Passengers Please get ready for another take off back to Paris” The captain replied on the loudspeaker.
Everyone buckled their seat belts back together with a simple click! Of the belt. The plane was already starting to move but the plane tipped over to the left hand and was going to be even more trouble because they were stuck,then everybody had to come out of the but with terrified faces they
knew that there was nobody there to help them.
Suddenly a second plane came to help them by the old lady and her crew.
Hi Lynette,
ReplyDeleteYou have some fantastic ideas in your writing! Well done. You can always try reading your story aloud to yourself so you can hear whether it makes sense. This is a really good way to fix up any mistakes.
Keep up the great work, Lynette!
Miss West